Bicycle Haiku

Disclaimer: I believe haiku is the most abused form of writing in America.

A co-worker sent me a pair of so typical, so bad haiku. The better of the two reads:

   Riding in downpour
   Bicycle has no fenders
   Who needs a bidet

Um, gee, that’s so evocative. I responded with a link to the Bicycle Haiku page. It has a variety of bicycle related haikus, some very good. While I was there I (hey it’s the nature of the web) clicked through to a couple of interesting sites.

On a cross country trip in 1979 Kevin Kelly kept a scetch book journal with daily ink sketches and haiku. You can click through a selection of them. I found many delightful sketches and poems among the selection.

Wishing to reflect a bit more on haiku I visited notes on 5-7-5. Glynne Walley presents an argument that English language haiku based on the 5-7-5 model make as much sense as Japanese sonnets. It goes on to present this example of true-to-haiku-spirit English poem:

   Twilight on the frozen lake
   North wind about to break
   On footprints in the snow
   Silence down below.

It’s from Bob Dylan’s “Never Say Goodbye”. I think he’s right.

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